Thursday 30 September 2021

Writing & Thinking

 I am inclined to baulk at the gradual transition in the meaning of words such as "disinterest" and the slow decline in the general English-speaking population's understanding of the difference between "less" and "fewer". However, I try hard to remember that it is the English language's adaptability and pliancy that is one of its greatest strengths. 

It was in the spirit of cultivating my tolerance for modern usage that my eye was caught by this passage in a book I picked up by a writer called William Zinsser:

'I’m far less preoccupied than I once was with individual words and their picturesque roots and origins and with the various fights over which new ones should be admitted into the language. Those are mere skirmishes at the edge of the battlefield; I will no longer man the ramparts to hurl back such barbarians as “hopefully.”'


What kept my attention was what followed, which strikes me as important:


'What does preoccupy me is the plain declarative sentence. How have we managed to hide it from so much of the population? Far too many Americans are prevented from doing useful work because they never learned to express themselves. Contrary to general belief, writing isn’t something that only “writers” do; writing is a basic skill for getting through life. Yet most American adults are terrified of the prospect—ask a middle-aged engineer to write a report and you’ll see something close to panic. Writing, however, isn’t a special language that belongs to English teachers and a few other sensitive souls who have a “gift for words.” Writing is thinking on paper. Anyone who thinks clearly should be able to write clearly—about any subject at all.'



I encounter so many people who cannot write a clear sentence, and I worry that Zinsser is right - that their inability to write clearly is evidence of an inability to think clearly. In a democracy, especially one where voting is compulsory, that is a worrying thing*. 



(The two passages are from: "Writing to Learn: How to Write - and Think - Clearly About Any Subject at All" by William Zinsser, which contains a delightful account of how Zinsser earned his university degree after an interview with Dean Robert K Root at Princeton - or, if your perspective is more contemporary, a disgusting account of white privilege in all its horror.)


*I have never forgotten the conversation I witnessed the day before the Australian federal election in 2010. It took place in a petrol station. One of the protagonists was a girl who manned the till in the petrol station. The other was a long distance truck driver who had just filled up his gigantic vehicle with loads and loads of fuel:


It was the day before the federal election in August 2010, and I had stopped at a petrol station in Victoria. A truck with the name of Australia's biggest trucking firm along its side pulled into the station just ahead of me. After I filled my tank, I went in to pay for my petrol and found the truck's driver in front of me in the queue. When his turn came to be served, he slapped a tabloid newspaper he was buying down on the counter. Needless to say its front page was dominated by the election. 

'Which of these mongrels are you going to go for?' he asked the petrol station attendant.

'I'm sick of the both of them,' she answered, 'I think I'll give those Greens a go this time.'

'Yeah, I reckon that's what I'll do too,' the  truck driver answered.

Yes, that's right - a petrol station attendant and a truck driver were proposing to vote for the Greens. 


Australia is the only country that has compulsory voting, and I totally support the concept - compulsory voting, that is, not us being the only country that has it. What I wonder about occasionally though is universal suffrage.

2 comments:

  1. About forty years ago, I worked as a copy editor. Somewhat after that, I discovered that many of those with money to pay did not care at all whether their sentences read as if badly translated and then garbled in transmission, but did care considerably whether their computer systems worked as specified. I switched fields and never looked back, though I do from time to time edit business letters etc. for family and friends.

    Anyway, back in my copy editing days, I learned how few writers write well. An advanced degree in education or the social sciences did not at all guarantee that the holder wrote well. For that matter, practicing the trade of copy editor did not necessarily imply that one wrote well. I used to have the copy of the first page of a booklet for copy editors working on technical materials, saved because the first sentence was so spectacularly bad.

    I do tend to judge thinking by writing. However, Jacques Barzun writes somewhere that Oliver Cromwell could hardly write a sentence; I would never suggest Oliver Cromwell as figure to emulate, but clearly he had a lot of administrative ability. And I think of a sometime co-worker whose emails are poorly written, but who has considerable practical judgment and organizing ability, and who in conversation is up with anyone I could name.

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    1. I doubt a career in copy editing even exists any more, sadly. On ability to write, this in today’s UK Telegraph is vaguely relevant - https://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/2021/09/30/now-like-basically-london-school-bans-words-like-basically-like/

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